"Hi"
"Do I know you?"
"No, that's why I came over here, to introduce myself"
"Well congratulations, you've achieved so much"
"That's one way to put. My name is Jonas."
"That's an odd name."
"That's what I told my parents - they wouldn't change it"
"They sound like great parents"
"They aren't"
"I was being sarcastic"
"I know"
"Than why'd you say "they aren't" as if you were telling me something I didn't know?"
"Well, my parents could've been good parents, just a little... out there"
"Oh. Well, I see you're fairly good at carrying an unwanted conversation, but I'm sorry to say that it will never amount to anything. No matter what."
"What if this conversation led to me taking you out to dinner sometime?"
"That would also amount to nothing, no matter what, because even if you took me out to dinner and I enjoyed it, and we went out another, and another, and another time, and so on until we got married, it would still amount to nothing."
"How would that amount to nothing? we would have enjoyed spending time together, and going places, and spending our lives together. How's that nothing?"
"No, you don't understand. Even if we did all those things, one day we'd both die, no ifs ands or buts. Then our accomplishments, actions and ourselves will slowly fade from the memories of those who knew us, until they either forget or die. Eventually we would be completely forgotten, and it would be as if we had never existed at all."
"Yeah... but we would have existed whether the people who come after us know it or not."
"So?"
"So, we could do great things, fun things, enjoyable things. We could watch sunsets, go to amusement parks, see movies, have dinners at nice restaurants; we could make the most of our lives, we could make something wonderful of our finite existence. And so what if all we leave behind is a couple of descendants and bones in the ground. We'll have had a good time doing it, and besides, it's not like we're the only ones who are going to die. Every single person who has and who will ever live has to deal with this, whether they know it or not, And well, frankly, one day humanity as a whole will suffer the same fate, and all it's accomplishments and doings will slowly erode, or collapse, until nothing is left and it it will be as if humanity never even existed at all... um... are you crying?"
"Sorry... I just never- never thought about life that way... That whole speech, it was- was-"
"Beautiful? inspiring? amazing? enlightening? truthful?"
"All of those, now sorry, my mascara's running, I've got to go get cleaned up."
"Oh, no worries. by the way, I never got your name."
"It's Amy"
Yes Richard, totally agree with what you wrote as Jonas on this one. We really should carpe the shit out of this diem because our days are numbered, so we not enjoy them while we can.
ReplyDeleteMuch deeper than that Love at First Sight dialogue we read.
Yeah, this did remind me of Loathe at First Sight, but I agree with Chris on how this is so much deeper. I also enjoy how it wasn`t as long as the Loathe at First Sight, and how I found this ten times more enjoyable. Great work!
ReplyDeleteHow civilized Gentlemen. We have come a long way. This also reminded me of "Loathe At First Sight" and I'm not sure the dialogues are all that different in terms of deepness but I have a tendency of over analysing things. Nonetheless, well done Richard. One more for the Existential Bible? Please continue blogging. I will miss them after you graduate;)
ReplyDeleteThanks guys, It's always nice to get positive feedback.
ReplyDeleteMs. Cat... I had totally abandoned blogging, but that comment changed my mind. I've almost always got some interesting topic on my mind and I'd actually like to get most of them down before I completely forget them. Also... having an audience is good motivation to write, even if it's only one person. I think it's that feeling of my voice being heard, and the knowledge that I'm not just throwing my thoughts into cyberspace. It's weird actually, a very strange thought. I'm not writing for an audience more than I'm writing for myself, but I wouldn't bring myself around to writing if I thought that my writing wasn't going to be read.
Richard, actually, you have encouraged me to start blogging! Odd huh? I'll let you know if I ever actually get it off the ground.
ReplyDeleteBut I know what you mean about needing an audience. I send all my 'deep' thoughts to my friends in England. They are far enough away that I am not embarrassed by what they might think and they'll read it, because that's the only they have of staying to connected to me. Also, we all went to University together so there is lots of shared experience between us to foster a common ground and language. But as my emails to them get longer and longer...I think I might just start blogging! But none of this would have happened if I didn't have an audience in mind. I think many writers have an idea of who they are writing to. I think it helps frame what we say and how we say it. I think it also helps us achieve tone--an very illusive term to describe our feelings towards who and what we are writing. Writing can lack depth and dimension without it.
I never feel like I spend enough time on audience and purpose in class. There is so much to cover really....and so many distractions. I wish the course was longer, but I also wish there were fewer people in the class (even though it is my smallest class this semester, it feels huge).
Anyway, I look forward to your continued blogging;) I was going to talk to the class next week about ways to broaden your audience on blogger...something you might be interested in.
See you Monday:)
I would be interested, and I'm glad that you'll look forward to me blogging :) although, don't expect too much in the near future, the robotics season is kicking off saturday and I'm afraid that I won't have very much time for anything else until we get the robot built. I'll try to keep my posts regular though.
ReplyDeleteAnd I'll be sure to check out those books, I've been meaning to go to a bookstore but haven't got around to it. Me and Brittany are planning on going to go to chapters today or tomorrow, so hopefully our plans don't fall through.
I'm looking forward to getting back to school. I've had too much free time lately.
See you monday :)